Final Draft

Viviana Gomez

Ms. Drambarean

Language A: English 1(Section 2)

1 November 2011

Manny Pacquiao

Pacquiao at age 32 already thinks on being a vice-president to help his province. They look up to Pacquiao as a hero because of his need to help his constituents. News Papers show that Pacquiao wants to help his constituents in Sarangani Province. In addition he aids typhoon victims. Finally Manny Pacquiao helps build Hospitals. Manny Pacquiao is considered a hero because he aids typhoon victims, wants to help his constituents in Sarangani Province. Manny Pacquiao aims to help his constituents when he does his trip to U.S.

Manny Pacquiao is considered a hero because he wants to help his constituents in Sarangani Province. Manny Pacquiao wants to help constituents in Sarangani Province, on his trip to United States. The contribution made by Manny Pacquiao will benefit “his constituents in Sarangani Province”. According to the abs-cbn News.com  Manny Pacquiao says, “ [Napa] pag-isipan ko sasabihin ko … na matnlungan ang province ko ( I thought about what I’m going to tell him.. to help my province),”said Pacquiao. This evidence shows that Manny Pacquiao wants to help his Province. Manny Pacquiao is now helping typhoon victims.

Another reason why Manny Pacquiao is considered a hero because he aids the typhoon victims. Manny Pacquiao left his training camp to go to a disaster zone to help and donate money. According to Latimes.com Manny Pacquiao in October 5, 2009 donates money to help people who where victims in the typhoon. “ He had numerous people advising him not to go. Didn’t matter. He still went. When Manny wants to do something, he does it,” said Arum Pacquiao’s promoter. This evidence shows how Pacquiao is a hero because he helps victims and donates money. In contribution to his Province Manny Pacquiao helped build Hospitals.

 Finally why Manny Pacquiao is considered a hero because he helps build Hospitals. Manny Pacquiao helped to build the very first Hospital in Sarangani. According to Sunstar.com Manny Pacquiao “pledged to help the Aquino administrator in constructing the first ever Hospital in this Province”. This evidence shows that Manny Pacquiao is considered  a hero because of his donations to help make a Hospital.

In conclusion Manny Pacquiao is considered a hero because of all the things that he has done to support Sarangani Province all of this evidence shows that Manny Pacquiao does care about helping others.

Works Cited

Eaves, Elisabeth. "Two Billion Slum Dwellers - Forbes.com."

Information for the World's Business Leaders - Forbes.com. 06 Nov. 2006. Web. 08 Nov. 2011. <http://www.forbes.com/2007/06/11/third-world-slums-biz-cx_21cities_ee_0611slums.html>

Fink, Sheri. "Cities of the Poor I:Life in the Slums (kenya)." Cities of the Poor I: Life in the Slums (kenya). Public Radio International: the World, 18 Dec. 2006. Web. 8 Nov. 2011. <http://theworld.org/node/6669>

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Vivian Gomez

Ms. Jaeger

World Geography

Ms. Hinojosa

 

            In slums around the world there are many health-related issues such as poor nutrition,

high disease rates in children, and lack of sanitation. Slums are not of a very good way to live.

Slums are mainly in the Eastern Hemisphere, but slums are a run-down area of a city

characterized by poor housing and lack of security, also are very crowded.

            Slums are a bad place for children to live. Slums don’t have a good sanitation and a lot of

kids do not have good clothing or just don’t have good footwear.  A lot of kids get infections

because they just walk barefoot on the dirty streets. Many of these kids die from diseases. India

is one of the places in which nutrition is not good, slums aren’t just by themselves it also takes in

 hand very poorly nutrition. India is one of the places in which urbanization is growing really

fast. Kids that live in India and have very poorly nutrition are mainly more venerable to get

diseases more easier.

            Slums in India besides having bad nutrition on everybody living there they also have

 diseases. In the article Two Billion Slums Dwellers, “slum children in sub- Saharan Africa are

more likely to die from water-borne and respiratory illness than rural children, while women

living slums are more likely to contract HIV.” In slums there are many diseases. The diseases are

huge part because not everybody living in slums have enough money to pay a doctor. Mainly a

lot of kids do suffer leukemia and do not get treatment at all. But in slums there are more

diseases in which people living there can not do anything.

            Slums in India besides having malnutrition, diseases they have lack of sanitation. People

living in slums are already used to live in place in which the sanitation is really bad. According

to Cities of the Poor I :  Life in the Slums (Kenya) “That’s the sewage. Now it’s passing through

 the slums.” The sanitation is so poorly that not a lot of people have restrooms and they have to

do necessaries in plastic bags and the plastic bags just get thrown far away in which it also

damages their own place “slums”. The slums are full of diseases and mainly because of all the

lack of sanitation. This is also a cause of kids having very poor nutrition and people having

diseases.

            In conclusion people that live in slums have poor nutrition, high diseases rates in

children, and lack of sanitation. The slums are a very bad place to live and especially for children

who are more venerable to any infections or diseases and there are not many resources to get a

treatment.

Works Cited

Fink, Sheri. "Cities of the Poor I: Life in the Slums (Kenya)." 18 Dec. 2006. Web. 6 Nov. 2011.

Eaves, Elisabeth. "Two Billion Slum Dwellers." 6 Nov. 2006. Web. 6 Nov. 2011.

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Slums are not of a very good way to live. Slums are mainly in the eastern hemisphere, but slums are a run- down area of a city characterized by poor housing and lack of security, also very crowded. In slums around the world there are many health related issues such as poor nutrition, high disease rates in children, and lack of sanitation.

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I. Introduction

Slums is not to much of a good choice to go live in. Slums are mainly in the Eastern Hemisphere, but slums are a run down area of a city characterized by poor housing and lack of security, also are very crowded. In slums around the world there are many health-related issues such as poor nutrition, high diseases rates in children, and lack of sanitation. India is one of the million places in the world where slums are found and with very poor nutrition.

II. Defendable point 1

A.    Slums are a bad place for children to live.Slums do not have a good sanitation and alot of kids do not have good clothing or just do not have good footwear.Alot of kids get inffections because they just walk barefoot on the dirty streats. Many of these kids die from diseases.

B.   In India is one of the places in which nutrition is not good. Slums aren't just by them self it also takes in hand very poorly nutrition. India is one of the places in which it is urbanization is growing really fast.

C.   kids that live in India and have very poorly nutrition are mainly more vunerable to get diseases more easier.

III. Defendale point 3

A. slums in india  besides having bad nutrition on everybody living there  they also have diseases. In slums there are many diseases. The diseases are huge part because not everybody living in the slums have enough money to pay a doctor. Mainly alot of kids do suffer of lukemia and do not get a treatment at all. But in slums there are more diseases in which people living there can´t do anything.

 IV. Defandable point 4

Slums in India besides having malnutrition diseases they have lack of sanitation .People living in slums are already used to live in a place in which the sanitation is really bad.The sanitation is so poorly that not alot of people have restrooms  and they have to do their necesaries in plastic bags and the plastic bags just get thrown far away in which it also damages more their own place ´´slums´´. The slums are full of diseases and mainly because of all the lack of sanitation. This is also a cause of kids having very poor nutrition and people having diseases.


V. 

In slums the people have sanitation. in slums around the world  there are many health-related issues such as poor nutrition, high disease rate in children and lack of sanitation.

Thesis Statment

In slums around the world there are many health-related issues such as poor nutrition, high disease rates in children, and  lack of sanitation.